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More and more people are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are ther more advantage or more disadvantages of such services.

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 the technology online translating applications gaining popularity. The essay will argue despite its drawback that people will lose
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increase
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 learning something new. The biggest drawback of
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 people's learning ability as they continuously lose their interest
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 served
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 companies through translation
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.
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, previously in case any traveller is going to
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country
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 is different
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, they spend
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an intial
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intial
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 that
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 in their skills and helps
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 understand other
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culture
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 and behaviour effectively.
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, I think if they something
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 of learning they can use those three months to explore more to there travelling city. Some believe that translation
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turns
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 life on
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inter-nation communication in
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 effective and easier way. Travellers only need to have the
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 their phone which effectively
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their
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understandable words. They can utilise the
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experience, as
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 provide it free of
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 for all
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 using for inter-communication, through
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,
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 there is
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vloggers
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 who daily travel from one
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 to another
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 them so much that they can't afford their journey. In conclusion,
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 only
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 many things that they can be learned by using
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 in less
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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