You have bought some clothing online and not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you have bought the clothing from. In your letter: - give details of the purchase - explain the problem - explain why you need a replacement urgently.
Dear Sir or Madam
I heard about your store yesterday and liked the clothes there and ordered online. The orders arrived very quickly and I was very happy. Thanks for that.
But the size of the dress I ordered from your store did not fit me, you made it bigger than the size I ordered,
the
side of the dress is torn.
I hope you will replace my orders as soon as possible. Because I have to go to a wedding in 2 days and I can't wear Correct word choice
and the
this
dress. So I request you to replace it.
I hope you will contact me soon.
Yours faithfully
ZilolaSubmitted by saydusmonovasomiddin94 on
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Task Achievement
To improve task response, make sure to provide all the required details such as the date of purchase, specific items purchased, and any order numbers or receipts. This will make your complaint more valid and actionable.
Coherence & Cohesion
To elevate your writing in terms of coherence and cohesion, try to link paragraphs and sentences more fluidly. Use transition words such as 'Furthermore', 'However', 'As a result', to smoothly guide the reader through your argument or story.
Task Achievement
Maintain a polite and formal tone throughout the letter. Use phrases like 'I would appreciate it if...', 'I am writing to express my dissatisfaction...', instead of direct demands. This will make your letter sound more professional and courteous.
Coherence & Cohesion
For a more structured letter, include a brief introduction, a detailed body of the letter where each paragraph covers a single point, and a polite conclusion, requesting a specific action. This will greatly enhance the logical structure of your letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite