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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
#information #percentage #population #four #asian #countries #cities #predictions
The chart
display
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displays
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 information about the
population
 of four cities
of
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in
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 Asian countries that
living
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lived
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 over
the
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apply
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thirty
year
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years
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 between 1970 to 2020 and
also
 predictions for ten years in future.
Overall
, what
stand
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 out from the graph is,
the
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that the
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 percentage of
population
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the population
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 will
be increased
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increase
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 steadily in all countries.
while
 the
population
 fluctuated for all countries
over
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from
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the
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apply
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1970 to 2020.
According to
 the chart
at
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in
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 1970 Malaysia and
Philippines
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the Philippines
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was
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were
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in
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at
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same
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the same
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 level almost 30% and
then
 Malaysia had
a
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apply
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considerable growth and have been the most populated country
over
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from
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 the 2000
t0
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to
 2040.
whereas
 the Philippines fluctuated
during
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from
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 1970 to 2005 and
then
 will
rose
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rise
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 to 45%
untill
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until
 2040.
The
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apply
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Thailand and Indonesia had less
population
 in comparison
of
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to
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two
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the two
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 other
country
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countries
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at
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in
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 1970 but the figures
shows
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show
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 Indonesia went up significantly from 2000 and will reach
to
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apply
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55%
at
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by
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 2024.
Consequently
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Consequently,
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 in
Thailand
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Thailand,
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 the
population
 rate went up by 10% and
then
 levelled off at the same level until 2020, and it will be forecasted to
clim
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climb
claim
 50% by the end of the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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