The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram illustrates how the production of
milk
and other dairy products
.
Overall
, there are 8 main steps in the process of making milk
and related products
, beginning with cow eating grass and ending with new products
entering the market to be purchased
The initial stage is to let the cow grazing on green grass for nutrient purposes. Meanwhile, cows are taken into a milking machine for taking raw milk
twice a day. Afterwards, milk
is stored in a refrigeration to keep it fresh before transporting it to another place. Subsequently
, milk
is taken into trucks and delivered for manufacturing.
In the next location, raw materials are produced in the factory, and undergo numerous steps before a completed product is created. Simultaneously, dairy products
are divided into 2 categories, one is transferred to cheese, cream and butter, at this
point, milk
goes through mass-production to pasteurize and store in containers. Finally
, merchandise enters supermarkets and shops, waiting for customers to purchase.Submitted by nguyetcat.dao on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, products with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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