The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001.

The maps illustrate the changes in the Felix Stone area over a 34-year period, from 1980 to 2005. It can be seen on the map that Felix Stone witnessed a striking transformation. Most

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elimination of the farmland. Looking at the picture in detail, one can see that the farmland in the northeastern corner was turned into a large entertainment complex with a swimming pool, a hotel, and two tennis courts. The fish market, the marine, and the pier system were completely demolished to make way for a private beach. Turning to the southwest of the map, many wind turbines were erected facing the sea.

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, the cafe in the centre of the beach was still in the same place,

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a new parking lot was added next to the hotel to better cater to the accommodation needs of visitors.

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