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Many countries increase the amount of household garbage going to landfill every year. What are the causes and what can be done to reduce it?

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 number of states mounting their home
waste
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 these years.
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 of garbage. Public
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 definitely do not have sufficient information about how disastrous it can be to mount garbage and
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 and companies are not aware
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 they are producing.
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 of production can help regarding
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 should be revised by governments and companies.
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 know about
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 to nature they will not destroy their habitat anymore.
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. In general, there is a need for
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 to be taken and human
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 is being produced in all countries nowadays.
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Task Achievement
To improve your score for task achievement, ensure that your response fully addresses all parts of the task. Your essay should explore the causes and solutions to the issue in depth, providing clear and comprehensive explanations and arguments for each point made. Incorporate a variety of relevant and specific examples to support your ideas and arguments. This will make your essay more convincing and comprehensive.
Coherence and Cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, strive to organize your essay in a logical and clear manner. Use transition words and phrases to improve the flow between sentences and paragraphs. Ensure that your essay includes a well-defined introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. Each paragraph should focus on a single main idea, supported by examples or evidence. This will enhance the overall structure and clarity of your essay.

Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumerism
  • Non-biodegradable
  • Recyclable materials
  • Disposable culture
  • Public awareness
  • Cost-cutting
  • Landfill waste
  • Stricter regulations
  • Sustainable
  • Educational campaigns
  • Incentives
  • Composting
  • Recycling infrastructure
  • Single use
  • Organic waste
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