The graph below shows the number of tourists of visiting a particular Carribean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph provided an overview of the
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
Use synonyms
went
to a certain Caribbean Correct pronoun usage
who went
island
in the span of from 2010 to 2017.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the highest Linking Words
number
of people who visited the Use synonyms
island
was in 2017. With the exception of the timeframe between 2015-2016, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
had increased over the course of time.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, from 2010 to 2011, Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
staying on the Use synonyms
island
remained steady, those staying on cruise ships increased by roughly 0,25 million. By 2012, the Use synonyms
number
of total Use synonyms
visitors
held Use synonyms
it’s
increasing. Wrong verb form
is
However
, Linking Words
whereas
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
who were cruise ship residents declined, those Use synonyms
island
residents increased drastically.
For the duration of 2013-2015, the total Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
reached approximately 2.7 million. During Use synonyms
this
period the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
staying on the Use synonyms
island
remained constant, Use synonyms
while
residents of cruise ships rose gradually. Linking Words
However
, the Linking Words
number
of total Use synonyms
visitors
is mainly comprised of those staying on the Use synonyms
island
.
In the Use synonyms
last
year of the timeframe, From 2016 to 2017, the Linking Words
number
of total Use synonyms
tourists
reached 3.5 million.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, island, tourists with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 10 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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