The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
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essay will look at the number of tourists in the thousand entering a European country to go to three unique destinations Linking Words
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in twenty years starting from 1987 to 2007.
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Overall
, the data shows that mountain visitation grew slowly through the two decades Linking Words
while
lakes enjoyed a dramatic rise in the first decade and a half before falling off sharply, Linking Words
on the other hand
, the coast had been leaning down at the start before going up rapidly becoming the most attractive site for foreigners.
In the beginning, the beaches possessed the most overseas visitors at 40,000 in 1987 Linking Words
then
falling to around 36,000 in 1992 before fully recovering and growing to 75,000 in 2007, Linking Words
whereas
the lakes were the lowest in 1987 at 10,000 before increasing to a peak of 75,000 at early 2000 Linking Words
subsequently
decreasing to 50,000 in 2007, Linking Words
In contrast
, attendance at elevated locations in the years between 1987 to 2007 has steadily increased from a low of 20,000 to a high of 37,000.Linking Words
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