These days too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine, rather than by following a healthy lifestyle. To what extent to you agree with this statement.
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maintain
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well being
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well-being
medicine
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lifestyle
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is
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keep
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keeping
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a health
health
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healthy
lifestyle
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beneficial
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is beneficial
humans
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different
ways . Change preposition
in different
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doctors
and Use synonyms
medicine
crucial Use synonyms
role
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roles
during
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in
people
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people's
lifetime
.
From one perspective,many people Replace the word
lives
containing
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have
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a health
health
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healthy
lifestyle
through engaging variety Use synonyms
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of sport
sport
activities or regularly following Change the noun form
sports
diet
and Correct article usage
a diet
leave
bad eating habits.To explain, these days Wrong verb form
leaving
humans
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adapting
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adopting
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healthy
health
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lifestyle
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lifestyles
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change
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changing
play
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playing
sport
games Change the noun form
sports
for
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to
stay
active.Change the form of the verb
staying
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dicrease
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decreased
health
risks Use synonyms
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humans life
.Fix the agreement mistake
human lives
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contribute
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contributes
eroding
obesity problems among Change preposition
to eroding
youngers
in society today. As Correct your spelling
youngsters
consequence
, individuals do not have to apply Correct article usage
a consequence
doctors
or medicines for their Use synonyms
health
.
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other
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another
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medicine
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important
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people
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people's
lifetime
because in different situations we need Replace the word
lives
doctors
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medicine
.Use synonyms
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recovering Correct quantifier usage
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diseases
or Change preposition
from diseases
accidens
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accidents
accident
of
that time we apply Change preposition
apply
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doctors
.They help us Change preposition
to doctors
difficult
situations like Change preposition
in difficult
injuring time
treatment with Wrong verb form
injury
medicine
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on
center
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centers
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every day
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hospitals and complain Wrong verb form
visit
various
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about various
health
problems.Use synonyms
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apply
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apply for
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lifetime
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our lifetime
aslo
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also
different
situations.
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in different
while
maintaining Linking Words
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a health
health
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healthy
lifestyle
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beneficial
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is beneficial
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for humans
humans life
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human lives
but
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apply
doctors
and medicines Use synonyms
essential
for Add a missing verb
are essential
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a health
health
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healthy
lifestyle
.Use synonyms
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