The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
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The graph illustrates how many overseas
visitors
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to three different areas in a European country from 1987 to 2007. Units are measured in thousands.
Overall
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, it can clearly be seen that
visitors
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from all the areas increased throughout the given year.
However
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, the lakes experienced a dramatic drop in the
last
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given year. In terms of the area having a significant increase in
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, the lakes started at precisely 10 in 1987.
Thereafter
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, in 1992, the lakes
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up to 25. In 1997, the number of
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grew dramatically from 40 to around 75 in 2002 before facing a drastic fall to exactly 50 in 2007. Regarding the other two areas having a lower level of
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, the mountains stood at 20 and the coast began at 40 in 1987. In the following years,
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to the mountains had a slight increase and reached a peak of about 35 in 2007. Meanwhile, the number of coast
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decreased in the second year by 5.
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, the number of
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rose and peaked at 75 in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • number of
  • areas
  • European country
  • between
  • 1987 and 2000
  • graph
  • introduce
  • overview
  • trends
  • describe
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • summarize
  • main findings
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