You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want asl your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • explain why you want to take time off work • give a details of the amount of time you need • suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear sir
I am writing
this
letter to request that I am going to travel and relax on
the next month of Change preposition
in
this
year.So I want to get a holiday.
In
Change preposition
This
this
days i
am spending much more time Change the capitalization
I
to
work, Change preposition
at
also
I am working hardly
. So I am tired of work
One day my friends Rephrase
hard
offer
me Wrong verb form
offered
to
a trip Change preposition
apply
which
to Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
America. Correct article usage
apply
Also
I was very happy and Add a comma
Also,
receive
Wrong verb form
received
this
offer. So I should departure
on Replace the word
depart
first
day of Change the article
the first
this
next month with my friends.
I will come back after a month. Nenetheless
during Correct your spelling
Nonetheless
this
time my workmate Paul work
to cover my position. I only believe Wrong verb form
worked
he
,because he is Correct pronoun usage
him
very
agile and stickybeak person.
I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you in advance for your assistance
Correct article usage
a very
Your
faithfully Alan GordonCorrect pronoun usage
Yours
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logical structure
Ensure the letter has a clear structure: introductory sentence, one paragraph for each bullet point, and a conclusive paragraph.
greeting and closing
Use more formal greetings and signatures in letters to your manager. Instead of 'Dear sir' and 'Your faithfully', use 'Dear [Manager's Name]' and 'Yours faithfully, [Your Name]'.
single idea per paragraph
Dedicate one paragraph to each of the points mentioned in the IELTS task. This helps maintain focus and clarity throughout the letter.
complete response
Clarify the reason for your leave request by providing specific examples of your current work fatigue and the importance of the trip for your wellbeing.
suitable writing tone
Adopt a more formal and professional tone throughout the letter. Avoid slang and overly casual expressions such as 'stickybeak person'. Use complete sentences and check for grammatical mistakes.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite