The map below shows two possible sites (s1 and s2) of a new supermarket planned for the town of GARLSDON

The map below shows two possible sites (s1 and s2) of a new supermarket planned for the town of GARLSDON
The given map illustrates the expansion of Garlsdon, where a new supermarket is going to be constructed with two diverse suggestive schemes for its location.
Overall
,
it is clear that
both sides are parallel to the main roads and railways, but S1 would be presented in the white area
while
the other one could be implemented in the city centre. Looking at the details, S1 is about to be built in the countryside, apart from the middle, with the benefit of being close to the nearest land in the name of Hindon, which has a population of 10,000.
Furthermore
, the infrastructure would be to the west of the housing, at which point the street would not have access to the residential area.
Moreover
, as for S2, it would be the best place since it is going to be near industry, the avenue, and
additionally
, the centre of town, at which point it is completely closed to traffic.
However
, its drawback would be that it is positioned 16 and 26 kilometres away from Bransdon and Crandsdon, respectively.
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