The line graph illustrates three different kinds of crimes that occurred in Newport City center between 2003 and 2012.

The line graph illustrates three different kinds of crimes that occurred in Newport City center between 2003 and 2012.
The information about the three kinds of criminal activities which
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happened in the Newport city
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is illustrated by a given linear representation in the period of 10 years. The data has been calibrated in
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To sum up
, it can be vividly manifested that the highest proportion is attributed to car theft,
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robbery represents the lowest point. Upon initial examination of the chart, it is evident that an increment of almost 200 incidents was noticed in the
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in 2004,
Whereas
from 2004 to 2008, there was a remarkable downward trend was seen in the incidents of
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, the former one was 3700 and latter was approximately 1200. Probing ahead, fluctuations were apparent in the
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throughout the whole period.
Further
analysis reveals that
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a negligible incline was accounted in the
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which stole at
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till 2005,
however
from nearly 2700 cars were stolen in 2005 decreased to 2000 in 2006, the incidents
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up to 2600 in 2010. Analyzing the data in more detail, a slight increase could be seen in the
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of persons
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theft from 600 to 900 in 2005, Henceforward, the data remained constant between 2006 and 2008 at 500, each. Moving
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, there was a gradual surge was observed in the
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of
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by 100 in 2010, whilst the ratio of robbers was around 500 and 55o in 2005 and 2006, respectively.
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