There is an intensive debate about how the best method to decrease offences.
However
, a
lot
of individuals are proposing that the guilty persons must take strong punishments
while
others are going towards
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. In
this
l will discuss both perspectives
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' given in the end.
On one hand,
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the first group are perfect sentences required because
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crimes
committed are limiting and
people
are scared
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.
Moreover
, when the person
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crimes
and he punished
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ought to
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other
people
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more before going to
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crimes
.
For instance
, in the world today there are a
lot
of serious offences
such
as killing, stealing...etc.
in addition
,
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serious conditions require a strong punishment.
Furthermore
,
people
by nature are trying to avoid a bad destiny, so by imposing
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sentences, the proportion of
crimes
will be
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automatically.
On the other hand
, another gathering
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that the traditional ways of combating
crimes
are not sufficient, for
we need to create
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for reducing
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.
For example
,
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governmental institutions and civilian organisations must
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on the various media to advise
people
. Indeed, the guilty' persons
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do not
committedChange the verb form
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a dangerous crime should
be joiningWrong verb form
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in the process that
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to be
a Correct article usage
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good persons in
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society rather than punishing them.
Also
,
this
group says that the system of punishment
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been applied for a long time and a
lot
of
people
still
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crimes
, for
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we need to
followingChange the verb
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system.
To conclude
,
although
a
lot
of scholars
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to
appliedWrong verb form
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to punish
people
,
a notherCorrect your spelling
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believeCorrect subject-verb agreement
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that
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system is the best. I agree with the first opinion because the punishment is necessary for the universal' safety.