question: The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

question: The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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The chart displays information about the
population
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of four cities in Asian
countries
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that lived over the thirty years between 1970 to 2020 and
also
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predictions for ten years in the future.
Overall
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, what stands out from the graph is, that the percentage of the
population
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will increase steadily in all
countries
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.
while
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the
population
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fluctuated for all
countries
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from 1970 to 2020.
According to
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the chart in 1970 Malaysia and the Philippines were at the same level almost 30% and
then
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Malaysia had considerable growth and became the most populated country from 2000 to 2040.
whereas
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the Philippines fluctuated from 1970 to 2005 and
then
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will rise to 45% until 2040. Thailand and Indonesia had less
population
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in comparison to two other
countries
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in 1970 but the figures show Indonesia went up significantly from 2000 and will reach 55% by 2024.
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, in Thailand, the
population
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rate went up by 10% and
then
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leveled
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off at the same level until 2020, and it is forecasted to climb by 50% by the end of the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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