The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summariset h e information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons whererelevant.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone

calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

Summariset h e information by selecting andreporting the main features, and

make comparisons whererelevant.
The bar chart illustrates how many minutes were spent on telephone calls in three different categories between 1994 and 2001 in the UK. Units are measured in billions.
Overall
, throughout the
period
Local calls were dominated,
while
the rate was for mobile.
Also
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it is clear that
the gap between categories shrank after half of the
period
. Regarding the Local-fixed line, despite the increase to the half of given
period
, the figure returned to the start indicated.There was a gradual increase with just under 75
billion
to about 90
billion
from 1994 to 1998, respectively.
However
,it saw a slight decrease to about 70
billion
by 2001.
Whereas
, the popularity of national and international calls rose steadily during the
period
, climbing from approximately 35
billion
minutes utilized
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to 60
billion
in 1994 for the former and 2001 for the latter. Focusing on mobile phones, the number of minutes spent on
this
form of telecommunication was roughly 2
billion
in 1994, the lowest figure in all given years.The figure for it experienced considerable growth reaching 12
billion
in 1998.The mobile calls rocketed to finish at around 44
billion
in 2001
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