The table gives information about enrollment of students in Manchester University in 1937, 1963 and 2017.
The table compares information about the
number
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who enrolled in Add an article
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Manchester
over 3 different years (1937,1967,2017).
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manchester
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number
of new students
who enrolled in the university
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mamnchester
was( 327)which is much lower than the Correct your spelling
Manchester
number
of students
(1133) who enrolled to
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on
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the university
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University
manchester
in 1967.Capitalize word
Manchester
Moreover
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proportion
students
who enrolled to
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at
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the university
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of Capitalize word
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manchester
in 2017 was (55%)Capitalize word
Manchester
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number
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students
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the university
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manchester
in 1967.
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students
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