You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter •give details of the job •explain why it is important for you •suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference
Dear Rohit,
My name is Mohit, I am writing
this
letter
to request you that I need reference
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a reference
letter
from you.
Firstly
I want to tell you that I am your old student of
Account Management. If you remember I am the Change preposition
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one
who did top in your subject. Now, I am working as a manager in ABC Ltd. Company and I get a
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sent
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and I
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it and passed their all hiring requirements. At Wrong verb form
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final
stage, they request me to submit Add an article
the final
one
reference letter
from previous
institution. I think you are the Correct pronoun usage
my previous
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you
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who
know
me better Correct subject-verb agreement
knows
then
other professors. From your busy schedule, can you please help me and take out your 10-15 minutes to write a Replace the word
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letter
for me.
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this
letter
you can specify my education, skills and experience with Add a comma
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official
signature.
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This
letter
is very important for me because through this
letter
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chances
for me to get that job and explore more knowledge and Fix the agreement mistake
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and
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apply
one
of the best international company
or I will work hard to be more successful in my life. Can you please give a reference Fix the agreement mistake
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letter
which specifies my academic journey.
I would really appreciate it.
Thank you.
Your's sincerely
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General
Ensure to address the letter properly by including a formal greeting such as 'Dear Mr./Ms. [Last Name],' to make your letter appear more professional.
End your letter with a formal closing such as 'Yours faithfully' if you do not know the teacher well, or 'Yours sincerely' if you do,
Coherence & Cohesion
Make sure each paragraph has a clear main idea or purpose. The first paragraph could introduce the reason for writing, the second could detail the job and its importance, and the third could suggest what information the teacher could include in the reference.
Coherence & Cohesion
Your letter should be organized in paragraphs with clear separation and a logical flow from one idea to the next. Include an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
Task Achievement
To demonstrate a complete response to the task, include all required details: mention specific examples of your work or achievements that your teacher could reference, and explain why these would be relevant for your prospective job.
Task Achievement
Adopt a more formal tone and consistent formal language throughout your letter. Avoid informal language and ensure to use appropriate formal expressions.