The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California, and the rest of the world.

The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California, and the rest of the world.
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The charts presented the
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consumption in three different sections in San Diego County, California, and the world as a whole.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that more
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is consumed by homes than by industry or agriculture in the two American regions
while
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agriculture accounts for the vast majority of
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used worldwide. In detail, residential
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use makes up three-fifths of San Diego;
however
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,
this
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number is significantly smaller in California, at 39%. The percentage of
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used for industrial purposes ranks second in both areas with about a quarter and a
third,
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respectively,
whereas
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the agricultural sector uses the least amount, with corresponding figures of 17% and 28%.
In contrast
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to the two previous places, worldwide
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allocation is remarkably different. Agrarian usage has by far the highest proportion, with over two-thirds.
On the contrary
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, the portion for industrial and domestic
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utilization is substantially smaller; the former constitutes 23%, nearly three times as much as that of the latter.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • households
  • significant
  • industrial use
  • implications
  • agriculture
  • geographical
  • climatic
  • economic factors
  • patterns
  • sustainability
  • practices
  • surprising
  • exceptionally
  • improvements
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