Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter about my damaged guitar. I had it insured by your company. The guitar was in pretty bad shape when I found it. I had a cancer concert with my band in California on February 14th.

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why we were going there by plane on the 11th of February. After we got there, we could not find our musical instruments at the airport. The staff told us that our things got lost on another plane to another destination. We were very worried because we had a concert. A day later all our things arrived and we were relieved. But my guitar was broken. I had another one for show. I want to fix it because it is my favourite. I look forward to hearing from you about the resolution of my problem. I would appreciate it if you return the lost funds or send someone to fix it. Yours sincerely, Scott

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Ensure the introduction clearly states the purpose of the letter for immediate understanding. Although your letter introduces the issue, making the intent clear from the beginning can enhance clarity.

coherence cohesion

Consider varying your sentence structure and using a wider range of linking phrases to improve flow and coherence throughout your paragraphs.

coherence cohesion

For better cohesion, explicitly separate your letter into clear, distinct paragraphs for each main point. Starting a new paragraph for each of your bullet points (item description, how it was lost, the requested action) can aid readability.

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Pay attention to detail and ensure accuracy in your writing, such as avoiding spelling or grammatical errors ('cancer concert' presumably should be 'cancer benefit concert' or a similar clarification). This enhances your letter's professionalism.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

160 words

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Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

In many countries it is mandatory for school children to wear uniforms. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter, you should: tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it.

The number of older people is increasing. Some people think that this will cause problems in their countries; others believe this group is important to society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is a commonly held belief that the death penalty is a good deterrent to prevent heinous crimes. However, others believe that life long sentence is a better deterrent. Discuss both views

Nowadays the diferent between countries are becoming less evident because people follow the same media. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages.