The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas of a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
The given graph illustrates how many abroad
visitors
tried to visit the coast, mountains, and lakes of a European country from 19987 until 2007.
Looking into more details, in 1987 only 10 thousand
of
viewers visited the lakes, which was the lowest number throughout the graph. After a significant growth, it reached roughly 75 Change preposition
apply
thousands
in 2002, before decreasing to 55 Change to singular
thousand
thousands
in 2007.
The graph Change to singular
thousand
further
reveals,
Remove the comma
apply
the
number of tourists Correct word choice
that the
for
visiting the coast was approximately 19 Change preposition
apply
thousands
in 1987. Change to singular
thousand
While
this
number grew up until 1997 with roughly 28 thousand
, but
it rose marginally until 2002 with 21 Correct word choice
apply
thousand
visitors
, before jumping to 30 thousand
in 2007.
Most of the overseas visitors
enjoyed to go mountains with 40 thousand
visitors
in 1987. After a steadily
fluctuation until 1992 with 30 Change the adverb
steady
thousand
spectoters
, it grew considerably until 2007, reaching 70 Correct your spelling
spectators
thousand
, which was the highest amount of visitors
among
all these years.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, not only did the figure of coast viewers increase but visitors
to mountains and lakes also
experienced considerable growth.Submitted by Pegahghaderi85 on
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