The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbian island between 2010 and 2017.
The information about the
number
of visitors who explored Use synonyms
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the caribbean
caribbean
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Caribbean
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island
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islands
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while
their stay on the Change preposition
during
cruise
ships is depicted by the given line graph. The information is calibrated in the form of Use synonyms
millions
.
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Overall
, the most striking feature of the given chart is that the maximum Linking Words
number
of travellers Use synonyms
prefferd
to stay on the Correct your spelling
preferred
island
, Use synonyms
while
comparatively less interest was shown by the tourists to book Linking Words
cruise
ships in the initial years.
Taking a cursory glance, it can be clearly manifested that staying on Use synonyms
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island
was the first choice of visitors than its Add an article
the island
couterparts
starting from an initial figure of just above 0.5 Correct your spelling
counterparts
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millions
in the year 2010 which later stayed constant for the next Change to singular
million
one
year. Following that, travellers on the Correct pronoun usage
apply
island
continued to Use synonyms
rose
gradually before suffering a plateau from 2013 to 2015.
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rise
further
details, the Linking Words
number
of explorers on Use synonyms
the
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apply
cruise
ships Use synonyms
were
0.5 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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millions
in 2011, and Change to singular
million
then
decreased and reached Linking Words
at
just under 0.05 Change preposition
apply
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millions
in 2012. Change to singular
million
Moreover
, the Linking Words
number
of vacationers in 2013, starting again from 0.5 Use synonyms
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millions
noticeably soared and eventually became equal to the Change to singular
million
explorers
on Correct quantifier usage
number of explorers
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cruise
between 2015 and 2016. In the year 2017, there Fix the agreement mistake
cruises
is
a significant difference of 0.5 Wrong verb form
was
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millions
between the people who like to reside on the Change to singular
million
cruise
and Use synonyms
who
like to stay on the Correct determiner usage
those who
island
. Use synonyms
However
, the total Linking Words
number
of individuals on the Use synonyms
island
of Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the caribbean
caribbean
continued to grow Change the capitalization
Caribbean
till
3.5 Change preposition
to
Use synonyms
millions
in the given time period.Change to singular
million
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