The pie chart shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in the UK in 2002.
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types
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proverty
in the UK in 2002.
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poverty
property
It is clear that
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had the biggest percentage about
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of
following
by Single without Wrong verb form
followed
children
. By contrast
, Aged Couple
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Moreover
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nothing
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noticable
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noticeable
this
chart.
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with, the sum of proportion
of Sole Add an article
the proportion
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took hafl
of total citizens living in the UK. Correct your spelling
half
On the other hand
, the figure rate for Sole Parents
and Couple
with children
were
less than a fifth, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
while
the percentage of couple
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couples
percent
. However
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without children
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per cent
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followed
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Single without Unnecessary verb
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children
about 24 percent
, less than 2 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
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per cent
In addition
, Single aged persons and Aged Couple
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Couples
two
categories that had Correct article usage
the two
lowest
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the lowest
percent
and 5 Change the spelling
per cent
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the categories
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the total
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