in some cultures children are often told that they can achive everything if they try hard. what are the advantages and disadvantages?

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the younger generations are being

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that by doing their best they can be

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successful

in any area that they want. Being told that by pushing hard enough for their goals and not

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up is a way that some people are choosing to

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their

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.

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would certainly be a great motivator for them but it lacks the wisdom to teach them about failure. Putting an effort towards accomplishing your goals is a way that should be

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early

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but it is

also

important to know that in some cases there are bound to be mistakes and failures outside of anyone's control. The perks of educating individuals from childhood, that they can acquire almost everything that they put their

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to is vast and major. By remembering

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they can find the

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strength

to push their difficulties.

For instance

, the famous author Charles Bukowski

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was rejected by 20 different publicists by the age

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before getting

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for a book but he didn'

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quit. As we can see

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will payoff in most situations.

Therefore

,

this

will be a good lesson to learn.

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there is a matter of failure and

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situations which will eventually come up no matter the effort that was spent. Telling

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children

that they didn'

t

succeed because they didn'

t

try hard enough could have devastating effects on their mental health.

For example

, if someone who works as an EMT or Firefighter were told

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sentence, they are more likely to suffer PTSD after not being able to save someone due

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circumstances that they were in which was out of their hand.

Hence

, it is not always a

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brilliant

idea to tell someone that if they try hard enough they can always be successful. It is important to know that sometimes it's better to not try too hard.

To conclude

, teaching

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children

that they have to try hard in order to become successful can be a great motivation for them to

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their goals

through out

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their life.

Also

, it is as almost as important to let them know that sometimes, how hard they try, they won'

t

be able to pull off the tasks that they were given. I firmly believe that they should be told to

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best, no matter the

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.