The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
The given chart demonstrates statistics about the sale of
five
various products or Use synonyms
service
, namely, Fix the agreement mistake
services
food
/drinks/tobacco; clothing; leisure/Use synonyms
education
in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Use synonyms
Turkey
for a one-year period.
Looking at the Use synonyms
overall
structure, it is obvious that the most preferred product was Linking Words
food
by the huge proportion of Use synonyms
population
in each country. Add an article
the population
Accordingly
, clothing was less preferred compared to Linking Words
food
consumables, but not less than leisure/Use synonyms
education
since it has the Use synonyms
least
ratio of preference in all given Correct word choice
lowest
countries
.
Use synonyms
Food
/Drinks/Tobacco has the highest Use synonyms
rate
of consumption in all Use synonyms
five
Use synonyms
countries
, Use synonyms
Use synonyms
Turkey
being the first with having 32.14% consumption Change preposition
with Turkey
rate
. After Use synonyms
Turkey
, Ireland comes in second with 28.91%, Spain with 18.80%, Italy with 16.36% and in the Use synonyms
last
place, Sweden with Linking Words
the
minimal Correct article usage
a
rate
of 15.77%. The national consumer expenditure for Use synonyms
leisure
/Correct article usage
the leisure
education
section is 4.35% in Use synonyms
Turkey
, which is higher than every other country Use synonyms
in
the list. Change preposition
on
Whereas
a very small part of Linking Words
population
in Spain has expenses over Add an article
the population
education
, with Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
a
rate
of 1.98%, the lowest Use synonyms
between
all Change preposition
among
five
Use synonyms
countries
.
Use synonyms
Clothing
/Footwear consumption Correct article usage
The clothing
rate
is around Use synonyms
five
and seven Use synonyms
percent
in every country, Change the spelling
per cent
while
the population in Italy has more fondness for clothing than the other Linking Words
countries
, which makes 9.00% in statistics.Use synonyms
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