The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
The given chart demonstrates statistics about the sale of
five
various products or service
, namely, Fix the agreement mistake
services
food
/drinks/tobacco; clothing; leisure/education
in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey
for a one-year period.
Looking at the overall
structure, it is obvious that the most preferred product was food
by the huge proportion of population
in each country. Add an article
the population
Accordingly
, clothing was less preferred compared to food
consumables, but not less than leisure/education
since it has the least
ratio of preference in all given Correct word choice
lowest
countries
.
Food
/Drinks/Tobacco has the highest rate
of consumption in all five
countries
, Turkey
being the first with having 32.14% consumption Change preposition
with Turkey
rate
. After Turkey
, Ireland comes in second with 28.91%, Spain with 18.80%, Italy with 16.36% and in the last
place, Sweden with the
minimal Correct article usage
a
rate
of 15.77%. The national consumer expenditure for leisure
/Correct article usage
the leisure
education
section is 4.35% in Turkey
, which is higher than every other country in
the list. Change preposition
on
Whereas
a very small part of population
in Spain has expenses over Add an article
the population
education
, with the
Correct article usage
a
rate
of 1.98%, the lowest between
all Change preposition
among
five
countries
.
Clothing
/Footwear consumption Correct article usage
The clothing
rate
is around five
and seven percent
in every country, Change the spelling
per cent
while
the population in Italy has more fondness for clothing than the other countries
, which makes 9.00% in statistics.Submitted by zeynalli.tarana on
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