With the pressures on today’s young people to succeed academically, some people believe that non-academic subjects at school (eg: physical education and cookery) should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on academic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, few people think that

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not important and it is better to be eliminated from the syllabus.

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of the pressure addressed to

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that they have to achieve academic

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. I strongly disagree with

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view because it will reduce the advantage have made when the non-academic is still in the syllabus

Firstly

, every individual has their own interest and reducing

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available at school could lead them to learn something they were not enjoyed.

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, it will

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willingness to study because they are being forced and could

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perform badly in class.

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, decreasing

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could reduce the amount of people exposed in

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area of work.

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, workers needed in

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field must have to learn

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of work in additional

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to achieve

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of operation to work.

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,

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might be fired and

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unemployed

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have to learn academic subjects in order to get back their job as a teacher.

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,

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tend to be not as

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important

as academic

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since it is not in the same syllabus. It could

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of

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this

job

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degraded and wages are not appropriate.