The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reportung the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented diagram illustrates the changes
of
a public library over twenty years, from 20 years ago to nowadays.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, it can be seen that there has
been Change the verb form
have
much
changes over the given time. In the past there were only six different parts in the library; Change the quantifier
many
however
, these days, some sections such
as a Café, self-service machines, and a computer room
were added to the building.
In detail, on the left side of the entrance
the reading Add a comma
entrance,
room
was replaced by a computer room
which is next to the all reference books
sector. Moreover
, a door from this
section opens to the children’s fiction books
part where there are sofas and storytelling events occur in this
part.Back then
, this
section was used for computer games. Furthermore
, in the middle of the central library, there were two tables and some chairs which were removed in the new renovating
.
On the right side of the entrance, there was an enquiry desk which is now replaced by a café and close to Replace the word
renovation
this
part there are three self-service machines for public use. Additionally
, an information desk was added to the building, and then
adult fiction Correct your spelling
the
books
sector was relocated from the left to the right close to the information desk. Meanwhile, a lecture room
was constructed in the location of children’s books
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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