The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The data given depicts the development of the total
in
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apply
the
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apply
million
overseas travellers (Africa, America, Use synonyms
Asia
and the Pacific, Europe, and the Use synonyms
Middle
East) in four different times; 1990, 1995, 2000, and 2005. Use synonyms
Overall
, all countries experienced an increasing Linking Words
trend
Use synonyms
while
Europe indicated the highest and the Linking Words
Middle
East as the lowest.
If we look at the total Use synonyms
number
of travellers among the countries , the remarkable uplifting Use synonyms
trend
was occurring in Europe with the starting point far away from the other countries. That Use synonyms
trend
continuously ensuing until 2005 with the total Use synonyms
number
of multinational Use synonyms
visitor
doubling from 1990. Coming from the same side, the societies from Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
Asia
and the Pacific were Use synonyms
also
indicated as the highest with up to 60.2 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
people
at the beginning of Use synonyms
period
, and it was increasing 20 Add an article
the period
million
in 1995. The total Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
going Use synonyms
to
overseas in Change preposition
apply
Asia
and the Use synonyms
pacific
of 200 was almost two times bigger than the previous year and stuck at 135.8 Capitalize word
Pacific
million
Use synonyms
people
in 2005.
Africa and the Use synonyms
Middle
East were known as the least where the Use synonyms
people
from Use synonyms
this
area neglected to travel with the Linking Words
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
people
less than 20 Use synonyms
million
in 1990. Both areas indeed experienced a growing Use synonyms
trend
, but the total Use synonyms
number
of visitors still remained the lowest one until 2005; with less than 30 Use synonyms
million
participants.
America seems to be in the Use synonyms
middle
as the contingent international traveller. The starting amount of Use synonyms
people
from Use synonyms
this
area is not really high (80.5 Linking Words
million
), and it ended slightly above Use synonyms
Asia
and the Pacific.Use synonyms
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