The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The data given depicts the development of the total
in
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the
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million
overseas travellers (Africa, America, Asia
and the Pacific, Europe, and the Middle
East) in four different times; 1990, 1995, 2000, and 2005. Overall
, all countries experienced an increasing trend
while
Europe indicated the highest and the Middle
East as the lowest.
If we look at the total number
of travellers among the countries , the remarkable uplifting trend
was occurring in Europe with the starting point far away from the other countries. That trend
continuously ensuing until 2005 with the total number
of multinational visitor
doubling from 1990. Coming from the same side, the societies from Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
Asia
and the Pacific were also
indicated as the highest with up to 60.2 million
people
at the beginning of period
, and it was increasing 20 Add an article
the period
million
in 1995. The total number
of people
going to
overseas in Change preposition
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Asia
and the pacific
of 200 was almost two times bigger than the previous year and stuck at 135.8 Capitalize word
Pacific
million
people
in 2005.
Africa and the Middle
East were known as the least where the people
from this
area neglected to travel with the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
people
less than 20 million
in 1990. Both areas indeed experienced a growing trend
, but the total number
of visitors still remained the lowest one until 2005; with less than 30 million
participants.
America seems to be in the middle
as the contingent international traveller. The starting amount of people
from this
area is not really high (80.5 million
), and it ended slightly above Asia
and the Pacific.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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