In many countries, childhood obesity is a growing problem. What are the reasons for this and what can individuals and governments do to tackle the problem?

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In many countries across the world, nutritionists have been alerting

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society about the huge number of

children

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with obesity. To understand the plight,

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essay will point out some reasons which cause

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health problem and will give possible solutions to diminish the impact of

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crisis.

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industry, nowadays, works hard to sell products which are designed for kids. It is possible to see that packages are full of colour and bring

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characters to catch

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the attention

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of these little consumers.

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that, kids are constantly assailed by advertising programs on TV, tablets and cellphones, which are created especially to make them desire the savoury snack or the sugary drink shown on it.

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, these products are not thought to have nutritional value and provide health to kids. Many of them are rich in fat and sugar which causes bad impacts on

children

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's health,

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as high blood pressure,

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diabetes

and obesity. Considering

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, measures can be taken by the government to contain

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scenario.

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, imposing guidelines concerning the usage of safe

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percentage

of sodium, sugar and fat on products, regulating

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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275 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

childhood obesity
sedentary lifestyle
balanced diet
fast food
sugary snacks
physical activity
nutrition education
health campaigns
public health initiatives
government regulations
home-cooked meals
extracurricular sports
digital entertainment
sedentary behavior

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In many countries, childhood obesity is a growing problem. What are the reasons for this and what can individuals and governments do to tackle the problem?

Your opinion

Nowdays, many people have to work long time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What employers can do to make their life easier?

It is crucial for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as parks and squares. Do you agree or disagree?

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Write a letter to refer a friend for job in your company

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