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There is no objective fact that -------------------------- View is widespread in our reality because of its importance. Most people agree with this statement because of its many benefits. However, some of the people first mention its problems. My next paragraphs will discuss the causes of the problem and suggest possible solutions.

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There is no objective fact that -------------------------- View is widespread in our reality because of its importance. Most people agree with
this
 statement because of its many benefits.
However
, some of the people first mention its problems. My next paragraphs will discuss the causes of the problem and suggest possible solutions. 49 Describing the different types of problems, the first and foremost problem is that ------------------- Example:- --------------- -. Another drawback that may come to people's mind may be --------------------. To give an example -------------------------------- So there are many that type of problems in our reality but now I would like to discuss my next paragraph 49 On its darker side, there are some flaws that make it problematic and worrying, I would like to first highlight the most suitable proposed solution ---------------------------- - ----------.
For example
, ---------------------------------- . I think there are many solutions of
this
 kind, and we can talk about
this
 topic all the time. So I want to discuss my next paragraph about concluding. 54
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Increase the relevance and specificity of your examples to strengthen your arguments and make them more persuasive.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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