The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.
The pie chart illustrates the proportion of the most general benefits and drawbacks of Bowen
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visitors
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Overall
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the first place
of the
common disadvantage is the high cost of living and the least is food quality. Correct article usage
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of benefits and good accommodation places the last
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by survey
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Island
, people
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visitors
, which accounts for 42% while
the scenery is the second position of many visitors
said that, at just above one-third. 12% of the visitors
like to visit this
island
for culture and good accommodation was the least reason for people
go to Bowen Island
, which is 11%.
In terms of drawbacks, many travellers do not like to visit this
island
due to
the high cost of living, which accounts for half per cent. One-quarter of sightseers said that entertainment was not satisfied. Weather has the third position, which is 15 per cent and food quality is the least cause for sightseeing people
do not like this
place
, at one in a ten.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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