The table shows information about metro systems in six different cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The table illustrates the information
of
underground Change preposition
on
railway
systems in six nations namely London
, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles. As well as
it depends on two aspects such
as kilometers
of Change the spelling
kilometres
route
and Add an article
the route
passenger
per year in millions.From 1863 to 2001.
An Fix the agreement mistake
passengers
Overall
perspective, the London
railway
system ran the highest kilometres of route
Add an article
the route
while
Koyoto has the least travel. Tokyo people
travelled more than Kyoto.
The London
railway
system was opened in 1863 and it travelled across the nation by 394 kilometers
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kilometres
while
775 passengers were
travelled by trains in Unnecessary verb
apply
London
. In 1990, the
Paris Correct article usage
apply
was
started Unnecessary verb
apply
railway
service for their Correct article usage
a railway
people
and it travelled in routes of 199 kilometers
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kilometres
along with
1191 people
were
Unnecessary verb
apply
travelled
. Change the form of the verb
traveling
Then
the next period of 1927, Tokyo, trains were
ran Unnecessary verb
apply
in
199 Change preposition
for
kilometers
and 1927
commuters travelled.
Change preposition
in 1927
Furthermore
, Washingdon
DC Correct your spelling
Washington
has opens
in Wrong verb form
opened
railway
system in 1976, 144 people
travelled and 126 kilometers
of routes Change the spelling
kilometres
it's
travelled. In 1981, Koyto Unnecessary verb
it
has
Wrong verb form
had
the
passengers Correct article usage
apply
of
45 and Change preposition
apply
rains
travelled for just 11 Fix the agreement mistake
Rain
kilometers
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kilometres
then
Kos angles had 28 kilometers
of Change the spelling
kilometres
journey
and 50 Add an article
the journey
a journey
people
travelled in 2001.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words railway, london, kilometers, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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