The table shows information about metro systems in six different cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The table shows information about metro systems in six different cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
The table illustrates the information
of
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underground
railway
systems in six nations namely
London
, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles.
As well as
it depends on two aspects
such
as
kilometers
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of
route
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the route
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and
passenger
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passengers
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per year in millions.From 1863 to 2001. An
Overall
perspective, the
London
railway
system ran the highest kilometres of
route
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the route
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while
Koyoto has the least travel. Tokyo
people
travelled more than Kyoto. The
London
railway
system was opened in 1863 and it travelled across the nation by 394
kilometers
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while
775 passengers
were
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travelled by trains in
London
. In 1990,
the
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Paris
was
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started
railway
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a railway
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service for their
people
and it travelled in routes of 199
kilometers
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along with
1191
people
were
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travelled
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.
Then
the next period of 1927, Tokyo, trains
were
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ran
in
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199
kilometers
and
1927
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in 1927
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commuters travelled.
Furthermore
,
Washingdon
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Washington
DC
has opens
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in
railway
system in 1976, 144
people
travelled and 126
kilometers
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of routes
it's
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it
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travelled. In 1981, Koyto
has
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the
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passengers
of
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45 and
rains
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travelled for just 11
kilometers
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then
Kos angles had 28
kilometers
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of
journey
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the journey
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and 50
people
travelled in 2001.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words railway, london, kilometers, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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