You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The frame above illustrates figures in three states in the United States. The features are age, average income per
person
, and population
beneath the line of poverty. The states are California
, Utah
and Florida
.
Concerning on aged
, Change preposition
age
Utah
has the
higher percentual of youngers, about 28% of their Correct article usage
a
population
, whereas
Florida
has the
higher percentual of people over 60 years (23%). Correct article usage
a
Utah
has almost a third of their
Correct pronoun usage
its
population
over 60 years when
compared to Correct word choice
old when
Florida
. California
depicts intermediate numbers in both ranges (under 18 and over 60).
Analysing the average amount earned per person
, California
has the major value ($ 23.000), followed by Florida
($ 22.000), and Utah
($ 17.000) is in the last
position among the three administrative regions. The difference between California
and Florida
is only $1.000. In spite of the fact that California
has a good income per person
, this
state presents the worst percentage of people below poverty
line (16%). Correct article usage
the poverty
On the other hand
, Utah
has a lower mean income per person
, however
, presents a better performance on population
above poverty, about 9%, when compared to California
and Florida
(12%).Submitted by fmulato on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words person, population, california, utah, florida with synonyms.
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