The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The graph illustrates how many tourists visited a
ceartain
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certain
Cribbean
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Caribbean
island from 2010 to 2017. On the whole, there was an increase in the
number
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of
visiters
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visitors
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in the iland during the period. One of the features to note is that the total
number
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of
people
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visiting the iland increased
thryoughout
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throughout
the period. More specifically, there
was
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1
million
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people
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in 2010, and
then
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, rose to a staggering 3.5
million
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people
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by the end of the period in 2017. The second point to note is that
vitsitors
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visitors
staying on
cruse
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cruise
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ships was
also
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increasing. Looking more closely, the
number
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of
people
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fell slightly from 2011 at 0.5
million
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to around 0.25
million
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, but after that, increased to 2
million
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in 2017.
Interestinglly
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Interestingly
, the
number
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of
visiters
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visitors
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staying on
iland
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Iland
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had not
change
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changed
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from 2013 to 2017. Specifically, it rose from
the
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a
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low of about 0.75
million
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in 2010 to
1.5million
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1.5 million
in 2013,but from 2013 to 2017, the
number
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was almost the same at 1.5
million
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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