The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram delineates the
process
of making instant noodles
.The process
consists of 8 steps,during which noodles
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noodle
discs
are made from dough
,then
cooked,dried and packaged in cups
with other ingredients.
First of all,flour,which is the prominent material of noodles
,is translated from storage silos into manufacturing factories by trucks.The next step is
mixing the flour,this
can be accomplished with the help of a mixer.At the same time,water and oil are mixed with flour as well,then
these materials will become dough
.The following step will need rollers so that all dough
can be rolled into dough
sheets.What comes next is changing these dough
sheets into strips,to accomplish this
,conveyor belts will be needed.Then
these strips are made into discs
and cooked with oil,after that,they are placed for a while
for drying.Once this
stage in the process
is completed,these noodles
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noodle
discs
will be packaged into commodities,this
can be finished with cups
as containers,quantitative vegetables,spices and noodles
discs
are put into cups
.The process
ends with labelling the outside of these cups
and sealing them in the markets.
Overall
,the stages involved in producing instant noodles
have been completed.Submitted by 1320493878 on
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