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This line graph represents how much wast was produced by three factories between 2000 and 2015.

This line graph represents how much wast was produced by three factories between 2000 and 2015.
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The line chart shows the
waste
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 in
tonnes
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 from three different companies in 15 years from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
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 , the vast majority of the
waste
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 was produced by
company
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 A , whilst
company
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 C exceeded
company
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 A around 2013 as its production of
waste
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 kept rising in the given 15 years.
According to
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 the Information shown in the graph,
company
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 A produced 12
tonnes
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 of
waste
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 in 2000 which was the most and almost 3 times more than that from
company
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 B. Unlike
company
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 A and
company
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 B experienced reductions in 2005,
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company
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Company
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 C witnessed 250%
grouth
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growth
 from 4
tonnes
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 to 10
tonnes
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among
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in
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 the given period. What should be particularly mentioned
was
Verb problem
is that
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 the
amounts
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amount
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 of
waste
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 from
company
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 B plummeted after 2005. With
7
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a 7
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tonnes
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 decline, its
waste
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 was only 3
tonnes
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 in 2015.
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