This line graph represents how much wast was produced by three factories between 2000 and 2015.

This line graph represents how much wast was produced by three factories between 2000 and 2015.
The line chart shows the
waste
in
tonnes
from three different companies in 15 years from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
, the vast majority of the
waste
was produced by
company
A , whilst
company
C exceeded
company
A around 2013 as its production of
waste
kept rising in the given 15 years.
According to
the Information shown in the graph,
company
A produced 12
tonnes
of
waste
in 2000 which was the most and almost 3 times more than that from
company
B. Unlike
company
A and
company
B experienced reductions in 2005,
company
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Company
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C witnessed 250%
grouth
Correct your spelling
growth
from 4
tonnes
to 10
tonnes
among
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in
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the given period. What should be particularly mentioned
was
Verb problem
is that
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the
amounts
Fix the agreement mistake
amount
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of
waste
from
company
B plummeted after 2005. With
7
Correct article usage
a 7
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tonnes
decline, its
waste
was only 3
tonnes
in 2015.
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