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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the average carbon dioxide
emissions
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 per person in 4 different countries (the United
Kingdom
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, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal) over the period of 40 years from 1967 to 2007. Units are measured in metric
tonnes
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.
Overall
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, It can be seen that the CO2
emissions
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 for both the United
Kingdom
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 and Sweden decreased over the years,
while
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 Italy and Portugal increased.
Also
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, during the whole period, the United
Kingdom
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 had the highest record. Regarding to United
Kingdom
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's CO2
emissions
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, they stood at 11
tonnes
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 and decreased constantly before reaching around 9
tonnes
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 in the final year.
Likewise
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, Sweden was about 9
tonnes
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 in the beginning and reached a peak of more than 10
tonnes
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 in 1967 before falling significantly to approximately 6
tonnes
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 in 2007.
On the contrary
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, Italy had around 4
tonnes
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 of CO2
emissions
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 in 1967 and it rose until it reached 8
tonnes
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 in the
last
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 year.
Similarly
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, Portugal started at 1 tonne and
then
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 increased to nearly 6
tonnes
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at the end
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 of the period.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 79%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, kingdom, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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