All over the world, people watch foreign films much more than locally produced films. Why? Should the government provide financial support to local film industries?

Nowadays, people around the world tend to watch

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from foreign countries rather than from their own. Overseas

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offer more incredible experiences to the

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as they

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stand with creative plots. The government should help

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industry by giving financial aid

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and sending

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people overseas so they can study and improve the quality of their

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. To start with, foreign

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usually have a wide range of genres that capture the

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’s attention. They manage to produce blockbuster

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with highly creative

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not real, yet at the same time still offer some sense that leaves the

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curious

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to

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and

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more. In Indonesia,

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, the most famous

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the

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that local

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has yet to explore, namely science fiction and superheroes.

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like Interstellar and Avengers could

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almost two months of screen time in Indonesia, yet it seems like local house

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still could not grasp and follow

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trend pattern. Most of the local

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that have been released usually have a mainstream have

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storyline and predictable plot.

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similarity does not

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the

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keep

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on the edge of their seat. Even though there are A-list actors and actresses

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could execute the idea and turn the

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into life, most of the time, it still fails to reach a

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wider

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. Sadly, most of the

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of

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in Indonesia,

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issue. Suppose they have proper brainstorming and a compact and compact and exciting storyboard; local

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will

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and

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after by the people. I believe that financial support should be given by authorities to improve local movie industries.

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, rather than spending the money on the filmmaking process, it is more efficient by improving the human resources. They should invest more in

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industry by giving abundant scholarship opportunities to countries that become the benchmark of good

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movies

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, like South Korea and The USA. In conclusion, the main reason foreign

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are more movie is preferable is because of the uncommon theme they offer since local

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mostly sticks to similar stories. To help local film

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thrive, investing in upgrading local actors in film industries should be done by providing scholarships by the government.