The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented charts indicate some data about the alters in the purchasing of electrical appliances and figures of time consumed during housework in a country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, it can be seen that the proportion of households with electrical instruments has increased. Linking Words
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the number of hours of housework per week is decreased.
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