The popularity of online education has grown significantly in recent years. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.
Over the
last
few years, online education
has increasing
importance in the level, Wrong verb form
increased
such
as the popularity in some countries. While
some people strongly support the opinion that this
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a benefit
children
there are other people who think that it is negative
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the positive
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sides
this
and draw a conclusion.
On the one hand, online education
has
very significant, Verb problem
is
convenient
for Correct word choice
and convenient
children
and also
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for students. Beside
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this
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communication or lessons. Add a hyphen
face-to-face
That is
, students can see repeat topics in the online education
. From my personal point of view, all individuals have been seeing lessons their
free time, at home and Change preposition
in their
other
places. Change preposition
in other
That is
, they do homework anywhere. For example
, Outskirt
population can not go to long places for Correct article usage
the Outskirt
education
every day as well as
inconvenience. As a result
, they uses
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from
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cheaper
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and cheaper
education
and this
the
best way of Add a missing verb
is the
study
.
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studying
On the other hand
, other people argue that pupils can not enough study in the
online Correct article usage
apply
education
because they do not want to study new
language and new skills. Teachers do not over the control Add an article
a new
their
users. Change preposition
of their
Consequently
, pupils and crazy children
are not find
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do not find
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jobs
waste
time. Replace the word
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on
the
time because they believe that teachers are not shouting for Correct article usage
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them
do
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education
has
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does
children
.
In conclusion, online education
has grown significantly in recent years and this
situation is open
doors Wrong verb form
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to opportunity
opportunity
for all individuals. I believe that online Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
education
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cosy
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