Some people believe that the government Should take care of old people and provide financial support after they retire. Others say individuals should save during their working years to fund their own retirement. What is your opinion? Give reason for your answer and include examples from your own experience

The question of whether elderly individuals ought to be taken

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of by the authorities has prompted a substantial debate.

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, Which from my perspective is the right thing, because the constitution mandates it, and they paid

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during their labour days. Others contend against

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is actually their constitutional right so should be upheld.

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, in Nigeria, old people are seen on the street begging because

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embezzled all the funds meant to take

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of the aged, which is against the law. Obviously, the elderly citizens would have been well taken

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of if not for the corrupt

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.

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, it is the government's responsibility to cater for the retired folks and should be implemented.

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. they

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paid

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to the authorities when they were still strong.

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, Anambra state has the most effective operating system, because everyone that paid

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is completely catered for at retirement. Clearly, the state will not be able to function if people do not pay

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and the

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keep to their obligations.

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, the

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should assume the complete responsibility of the retired group. In my opinion, the

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are obligated as per the constitutional law and by virtue of receiving tax contributions when they are young. In conclusion, the argument that the government ought to take

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retired folks has sparked a considerable dispute.

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some advocate for

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, which in my opinion is better

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the law mandates it and that the elderly

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they were working. Others challenge

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fact has proved that it is the responsibility of the

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to cater for the retired citizens.