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This line graph represents how much wast was produced by three factories between 2000 and 2015.

This line graph represents how much wast was produced by three factories between 2000 and 2015.
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The line chart illustrates the
avarge
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 of
wate
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waste
 products in three different
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company
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 in 15 over period 
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company
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 c was waste
product
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 increased others
company
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 were decreased in products . In 2000 ,
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 A was 4% after that increased quickly to 6
%in
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 2005 ,
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 from 2005 to 2012 the
product
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was
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rose slightly to around 7%and from 2010 to 2015 was rose rapidly to around 10%
product
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west
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Company
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 B in 2000 was nearly 8
%in
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west
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product
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however
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 in 2005,increased slowly to 10 % of
west
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product
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flowed by
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 from 2005 to 2015 decreased rapidly to 3%
west
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product
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products
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. In 2005
company
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 c was about 4%of
west
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product
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 meanwhile the
product
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west
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 was rose to 6
%in
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 2005 flowed by the
product
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west
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 was grow gradually to 7
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 2010 and the
product
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west
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 was increased quickly to nearly 11%
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words company, product, %in, west with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
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