Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skill. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that
education
plays a crucial role in human lives. Some say that from
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education
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focus
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focuses
education
instead
of learning practical skill
. I strongly agree with Fix the agreement mistake
skills
this
statement because practical
is required for getting employment and it affects innovative and creative ideas. Replace the word
practicality
This
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
To commence with
, indeed Change preposition
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education
system teaches more theory
subjects with less of
practical knowledge, Change preposition
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thus
, many students
are unemployed after completing degree courses because education
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the education
institutional
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institutions
teaches
ninety per cent of Correct subject-verb agreement
teach
theory
and rest
of the valance of practical, so they do not have any experience in practical Correct article usage
the rest
skills
. For example
, indeed 40% of engineers are unemployed in Sri Lanka due to
a lack of practical exposure even if they have good academic scores. Needless to say, a large number of students
suffer to get employment opportunities after completing degree courses because of
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skill
.
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skills
Furthermore
, students
study already proven
scientific research and facts rather than new ones. Add a hyphen
already-proven
This
cause
learner's creative and innovative ideas to come up to find new innovations. Correct subject-verb agreement
causes
For example
, all schools teach Newton's science law from school to college in science classes rather than new scientists and researchers, consequently
, students
are masters in theory
but what about practical skills
.
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In addition
, in this
fast-paced era, everyone should have a unique and creative idea otherwise
they will suffer to
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in
this
competitive world while
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traditional
based on Correct article usage
a traditional
education
system which is more theory
less
practical Correct word choice
and less
skills
.
To conclude
, learning more theory
and less practical knowledge can cause students
' employment opportunities along with
innovative and creative ideas to come up in this
competitive world. Therefore
, I strongly agree that from school to University education
covers more theory
and less spending time on practical skills
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