The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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between 1920 and 2019.
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housework decreased significantly.
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from 0 in 1920 to 90 in 1960, Correct your spelling
refrigerator
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an increased
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