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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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 graph
provdes
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provides
 information about the
percentage
 of
household
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households
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 with electrical
appliamces
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appliances
 and the number of
houres
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hours
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 per
week
 spent by people doing
home work
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homework
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 between 1920 and 2019.
Overall
, the
percentage
 of ownership of
electrial
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electrical
electric
 appliances showed increased between 1920 and 2019,
while
 the number of
houres
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hours
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that
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apply
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spent
of
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 housework decreased significantly. looking first at
percentage
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the percentage
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 of households, the
percentage
 of electrical appliances increased for all types during the
peroid
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period
. There was
slight
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a slight
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increased
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 in
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refrigerator
from 0 in 1920 to 90 in 1960,
then
 contuine
increaed
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increased
 to reach 100 in 1980.
However
, the
percentage
 remain
same
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 till
the
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2019. Vacuum cleaner shows a similar trend, there was
rise
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a rise
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 from 30 % in 1920 to 100% in 2000,
then
 the
percentage
 level out between 2000 and 2019.
In contrast
,
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the Waching
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Waching
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Washing
Watching
machine
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machines
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 showed
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an increased
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increased
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increase
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 in the first 30 years, before filled from 1960 to 1980 to just under 60%.
However
this
 figure well to just above
of
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70% in 2019. The number of hours per
week
 that people spent doing housework showed dramatically decreased from 50
houres
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hours
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 per
week
 in 1920 to just above 10
houres
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hours
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 per
week
 in 2019.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, houres, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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