in many countries in the world people buy clothes and choose hairstyles according to latest fashion. why is this happening? is this a positive or a negative development?

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fashion

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industry has been developing since

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globalisation. In many nations,

people

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variety

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a variety

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hairstyles

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of hairstyles

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and

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trendy costumes.

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have more

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sense and the media assists

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the

population

to become more fashionable.

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is a positive breakthrough and

this

essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with, the media plays a crucial role

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for

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the public

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buys

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new trendy fashionable

dresses

and

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choose

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many new

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hairstyles

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hairstyle

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because

people

watch and

fellow

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follow

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their favourite

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celebrities'

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celebrities

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fashion

knowledge

then

individuals

also

try and follow

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as

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celebrities.

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, these days, the

population

have more

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skills and skills naturally, and

as a result

, they can make their own

dresses

by fashionable and new

trend

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.

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, Indians

but

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buy

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more customised

dresses

than ready-made clothes because

of

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they like to wear

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unique

costume

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costumes

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than others.

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,

this

phenomenon

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a positive development because

human

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humans

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more self-confident when they wear

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modern dress

instead

of

traditional-based

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traditional

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ones, especially women in order to the

fashion

sector's growth to the next level and the government will get more revenue as tax from

this

field by

people

continuously buy plenty

fashion

dresses

.

For instance

, India earns huge taxes from

textile

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sector and

this

amount

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use

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for

another sector

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to improve. Needless to say, being fashionable and

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following

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fashion

-based activities can help to improve life

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and become

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more

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better. In conclusion, media can stimulate the

population

's

fashion

sense and it triggers

to

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them to

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follow and buy more

fashion

products.

This

is a positive improvement because it assists

to develop

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in developing

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the country's

economy

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growth

by

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taxes

along with

it stimulates

to

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the

population

's self-confidence.

Hence

, it is a positive breakthrough.