The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two bar charts depict the
people
born in and outside Australia
in three different areas
which are cities, towns
, and rural in the year
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years
of
1995 and 2010, respectively.
As illustrated in the year Change preposition
apply
of
1995, the percentage of Change preposition
apply
people
born outside Australia
in both cities and rural areas
has a significant increase approximately
8 to 10%, respectively. Change preposition
of approximately
Nevertheless
, in towns
, the number
of people
born in Australia
is greater compared to with
the Change preposition
apply
people
born outside Australia
.
Similarly
, in 2010, people
born outside Australia
shows
the highest percentage compared to Wrong verb form
showed
towns
and rural areas
. However
, the number of
population of Correct quantifier usage
apply
people
born in Australia
in towns
and rural areas
have
remained the same, even so, the Correct subject-verb agreement
has
number
of people
born outside Australia
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
a
Correct article usage
apply
slight decrease
for both Replace the word
slightly decreased
towns
and rural areas
.
In conclusion, the people
born outside Correct quantifier usage
number of people
Australia
in the year of
1995 and 2010 remain the highest of all, Change preposition
apply
while
the number
of people
born in and outside Australia
in 1995 are
constantly higher than Correct subject-verb agreement
is
2010
in both Change preposition
in 2010
towns
and rural areas
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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