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Some people believe all the company decisions should be taken by the managers, whereas others think it is better to include employee while making decisions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #company #decisions #managers #employee
It is often argued that
while
 making changes and
decisions
 for business,
employees
 should participate in meetings .
However
, others think it is all
manager
's responsibility to make all of the corporation's
decisions
 .In
this
 essay, I shall examine both arguments and state my standpoint. On the one hand , most companies allow managers
make
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 the
decisions
 for the companies because they are there to manage and examine each and all aspects of their work field
As a consequence
 ,they are able to understand what important changes are required for growing in positive numbers .
As a
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manager
 ,
it
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apply
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 has been seen that they have future achievement plans and managing responsibilities ,in terms of involving workers who do not know the plan in decision-making can hamper
in
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future terms .
For instance
 ,in a car manufacturing
company
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company,
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 it is impossible to match the employee vision and the
manager
's vision .
On the other hand
,involving
employees
while
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in
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 decision-making tasks helps in certain parts.One obvious positive side is they can make inside mistakes in the technical field and customer satisfaction part .
For example
,
whatsapp
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WhatsApp
Whatsapp
 which is
billion
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a
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dollar
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billion-dollar
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 company
there is
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had
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 only 50
employees
 when it was at its peak point,
also
 in the meetings each and all
employees
 were involved in serious
decisions
.
As a result
 , companies can grow faster with each other help. In conclusion, In my view, involving
employees
while
 making
decisions
 has a greater impact rather than
manager
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managers
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 only with each
benefits
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benefit
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both.
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task achievement
In the introduction, clearly introduce both sides of the argument and state your opinion straightforwardly to effectively set the stage for your essay.
task achievement
Develop each paragraph with a single main idea, supported by specific examples or explanations, to ensure coherence and enhance the reader's understanding.
coherence cohesion
Enhance your essay's structure by using a wider range of linking words and phrases to connect ideas more seamlessly, improving the essay's overall flow.
coherence cohesion
Ensure a clear division between paragraphs and use topic sentences at the beginning of each paragraph to guide the reader through your argument effectively.
coherence cohesion
Work on your conclusion by summarizing both views briefly and reaffirming your opinion in a clear, compelling manner to provide a satisfying closure to your essay.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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