The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart demonstrates the various situations of
coffee
and tea consumption in five Australian cities
during the last
4 weeks,including Sydney
,Melbourne
,Brisbane,Adelaide
and Hobart.
Looking from an overall
perspective,it is apparent that the proportions of residents who prefer having coffee
or tea in cafe stores are highest in the majority of cities
except Adelaide
,which is merely slightly lower than the people who choose instant coffee
.In contrast,the figures of citizens purchasing fresh coffee
are always at the bottom.
In terms of buying fresh coffee
,it seems that this
kind of drinking habit is not so popular in all five cities
.It is noteworthy that there are two groups of cities
that have similar rates.One group is Sydney
and Melbourne
which have relatively higher percentages,accounting for 44% and 42.5% respectively.In comparison,only about 34% and 34.5% of citizens choose to drink fresh coffee
in Brisbane and Adelaide
separately.
As for instant coffee
,it is a mediocre choice in most cases.What’s more,their data reaches a similar situation and there is not a huge gap among these cities
.It is Hobart,Brisbane,Adelaide
,Melbourne
and Sydney
arranging
from high to low and their gap is about 2%~3%.Hobat reaches the peak of 54% and Wrong verb form
are arranged
Sydney
bottoms out at 45%.
When it comes to consuming coffee
or tea in cafe stores,it is more popular among customers in Sydney
,Melbourne
and Hobart,accounting for 61%,63 and 62.5% respectively.The number of clients is lowest in Adelaide
,only 49% of people choose it.Submitted by 1320493878 on
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