The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the generation of electricity which
run
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on geothermal energy.
Overall
, the provided progress has five distinct stages which consist of the flowing down of cold
water
, the injection well, the compensation of
steam
, the production well, and
finally
generation. The progress of generation commenced with cold
water
which flowed down to below the soil approximately 4.5 kilometres. After that, at the second stage, cold
water
reached the geothermal zone and there,
were
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exposed to heat by hot rocks.
Subsequently
, after the hot
water
attained enough temperature pumped up to the condenser which converts the hot
water
into
steam
and
produced
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adequate energy to make the generator
ran
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.
To conclude
,
Rleasing
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Releasing
steam
by
condenser
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the condenser
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, went through the pipe and
reached
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the turbine and
then
, the turbine run on
steam
and
contributed
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power to
generator
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the generator
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.and contributed power to
generator
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the generator
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, steam with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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