The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the generation of electricity which
run
on geothermal energy.
Correct subject-verb agreement
runs
Overall
, the provided progress has five distinct stages which consist of the flowing down of cold water
, the injection well, the compensation of steam
, the production well, and finally
generation.
The progress of generation commenced with cold water
which flowed down to below the soil approximately 4.5 kilometres. After that, at the second stage, cold water
reached the geothermal zone and there, were
exposed to heat by hot rocks. Change the verb form
was
Subsequently
, after the hot water
attained enough temperature pumped up to the condenser which converts the hot water
into steam
and produced
adequate energy to make the generator Wrong verb form
produces
ran
.
Wrong verb form
run
To conclude
, Rleasing
Correct your spelling
Releasing
steam
by condenser
, went through the pipe and Add an article
the condenser
a condenser
reached
the turbine and Wrong verb form
reaches
then
, the turbine run on steam
and contributed
power to Wrong verb form
contributes
generator
.and contributed power to Add an article
the generator
generator
.Add an article
the generator
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, steam with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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