The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line chart shows the rate of population in
Philippines
, Correct article usage
the Philippines
Malaysia
, Thailand and Indonesia living in urban areas, in the period of 50 years, and provides predictions for the years 2030 and 2040.
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Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the percentage of the population in all mentioned cities experienced a rising trend, Linking Words
while
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Malaysia
had the highest increase among other countries.
Looking at the details, at the beginning of the period the figure for Use synonyms
Philippines
stood at just above 30 per cent, which was more than others. Correct article usage
the Philippines
In addition
, after that Linking Words
Malaysia
had the highest figure with just under 30. By 2020, Use synonyms
Philippines
lost its position, and Correct article usage
the Philippines
Malaysia
took its place as the most populous country with around 80 per cent of Use synonyms
total
population. Add an article
the total
And the
predictions illustrate they both have an upward trend until 2040, Correct word choice
The
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however
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however,
Malaysia
is to Use synonyms
be stayed
at the top.
As Change to the active voice
stay
have stayed
regard
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regards
for
Thailand and Indonesia, they both had the lowest amount of citizens with under 20%, albeit they witnessed a rise trend until 2020, and reached Change preposition
apply
at
around 30 and 50, Change preposition
apply
repectively
.
Correct your spelling
respectively
Also
, it is predicted that they are to Linking Words
be grown
to above 40% by Wrong verb form
grow
they
year 2040.Correct your spelling
the
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Vocabulary: Replace the words malaysia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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